His Sentence:
The flies were his only friends--little excited beings--who didn't care about the stale food or cool climate of his cell.
From The Broker by John Grisham
The use of an appositive phrase separated by unusual dashes reflect his lonliness in his cell.
My Sentence:
The hunter tracked his prey-he would feast--using only the trail of blood to find the kill.
-- Posted from my iPhone
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