Sentence a Day #6

His Sentence:

They slept that night in a tiny country inn--eight closet-sized rooms--that had been in the same family since Roman times. From The Broker by John Grisham.

The use of an appositive phrase separated with dashes brings out the phrase emphasizing the country inn.

My Sentence:

The deer flinched in pain--the arrow gliding through the lungs and heart--and the hunter relaxed after a great shot.